Marcus finds out that James has been in a relationship with Donna. I invited Donna over to help celebrate for James birthday. I never knew she was trying to get back at me, for what happen to Jay. I searched the yard for her and she was no where to be found. I went inside the house to find Donna, in the bathroom with some PIMP getting high and having sex. I threw them both out of my house. I was really mad, because Donna had invited prostitutes from the street who were having sex all over my house. I asked everybody to leave before I caught a case. I can't believe this BITCH has brought these People over to my house. She must be out of her rabbit ass mind. Shortly after, Donna was rushed to the emergency room. She had taken way to many drugs. What else could go wrong?
I had an extremely hard time reading this book.
I hate writing bad things about books and authors, but I wouldn't feel right saying I enjoyed this book.
To be honest, I couldn't understand what was happening.
The book was one very, very long run on sentence.
There were no paragraphs, and no punctuation to distinguish when someone was talking etc.
The author kept bouncing around from one character to the next and I found I had to re-read pages over and over again to try to understand what had happened.
I apologize for being so blunt, but I don't know how else to say this. The book needs a lot of work and should not have been released to print.
*All opinions expressed are 100% my own. I was not compensated for this review. I was given a copy of the book to review*
I had an extremely hard time reading this book.
I hate writing bad things about books and authors, but I wouldn't feel right saying I enjoyed this book.
To be honest, I couldn't understand what was happening.
The book was one very, very long run on sentence.
There were no paragraphs, and no punctuation to distinguish when someone was talking etc.
The author kept bouncing around from one character to the next and I found I had to re-read pages over and over again to try to understand what had happened.
I apologize for being so blunt, but I don't know how else to say this. The book needs a lot of work and should not have been released to print.
*All opinions expressed are 100% my own. I was not compensated for this review. I was given a copy of the book to review*
No comments:
Post a Comment